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&hingwrongwithusieheyarequiteeffees-butthemissideredpoorstyleiing.Whenyouwritetoomaences，ywillturnouttobedullandunnatural.
Forexample:
1）Thispoemwaswrittenbyayounggirl.Shewasterminallyill（患绝症的）.ShewasinaNewYorkhospital.
2）Syisapromisingnewsourergy.Syisenergyfromthesun'sradiation.
Eaplesentencesabovebeabioalongerahlyflowiherevisedversionsareasfollows:
3）Thispoemwaswrittenbyaterminally-illyounggirlinaNewYorkhospital.
4）Sy，whiergyfromthesun'sradiation，isapromisingnewsourergy.
&enbiningisnotonlysimplyaobeaplishedbutalsoaskilltobelearhus，youshouldtrytoavoidtoomaeny，espeacademig.
Practice2-9-1
bineeapleseoalongerahlyflowiengonlyoneperiod（句号）attheeehewasnedkeepthemeaningthesame.Forexample:
Choppy:Kehaveeolivefortably.Forthatreasonheislookingforanewjob.
bined:Kehaveeolivefortablyislookingforanewjob.
Or:Kenislookingforanewjobbecausehedoesnothaveeolivefortably.
Ansrovidedonlyforthefirstfivesentences.
1.puterteologyhasadvahepastfiveyears.Itsadvanceshavebeendramatic.
2.HewasabsentfromclassyesterdayHewassi'tgotoschool.
3.ThenovelisaboutlifeontheAmazon.Itis300pageslong.Itisveryiing.
4.Alllivingthingsneedenergy.Elyfromthesun.Energyesilyfromthesun.
5.Awomaofherhouse.Shesawthreeoldmehreeoldmenhadlohebeardswerewhite.Theyweresittinginthewoman'sfrontyard.
&hesamei.Ouriissinging.Singinghasbroughtustogether.
7.AfamousHongKoedfivemilliondollars.Themoneywillbeusedtobuildseveralschools.TheseschoolswillbebuiltinsionsinSiProviheseregiobyahquake.
8.Thereisapiandihemoureelookslikeagiahetreesaroundit.
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